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How does divorce affects children?

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I guess When children are seeing a progression of divorce, they will be mature early because they can realize a kind of the mood, situation and their parent's accent. Also, they should know whether parents are fighting or not. And I personally think they could take a hint with other friends in the school.

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I guess When children are seeing a progression of divorce, they will be mature early because they can realize a kind of the mood, situation and their parent's accent.
>>> I guess when children are seeing the progression of divorce, they will be mature early because they can recognize the mood, situation, and their parent's accent.

Also, they should know whether parents are fighting or not. 
>>> Also, they should know whether their parents are fighting or not.

And I personally think they could take a hint with other friends in the school.
>>> And I personally think they could take a hint from other friends in the school.

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