¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ½Å*È­
2023-05-24 1337

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

The house I live in now is lined with shops, and only my family lives on the 4th floor of one of them.
That's why I only say hello to the people in the mall downstairs.
The house I lived in before was a 4-story villa, and there were 8 houses living there.
I greeted and stayed with the neighbors in the same villa, and there were many close neighbors in the neighborhood.
If the weather was good, we would meet at the playground, play with the children, share snacks, and go to pretty cafes or restaurants.
I also attended events at the children's school.
The house and neighbors back then were much better than they are now.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello there, Eliana!
I love the way you compared your previous to your current place where you are living. There are some changes in life that we really need to consider and sacrifice for the sake of our loved ones. Well, I hope that the place you are living in now will create good memories like what  you used to have :)  Enjoy your day!
Aki~


The house I live in now is lined with shops, and only my family lives on the 4th floor of one of them.
>>> The house I live in now is lined with shops, and only my family lives on the 4th floor.
>>> The building where I live now is occupied by shops and only my family lives on the 4th floor.

That's why I only say hello to the people in the mall downstairs.
>>> CORRECT!

The house I lived in before was a 4-story villa, and there were 8 houses living there.
>>> CORRECT!

I greeted and stayed with the neighbors in the same villa, and there were many close neighbors in the neighborhood.
>>> CORRECT!

If the weather was good, we would meet at the playground, play with the children, share snacks, and go to pretty cafes or restaurants.
>>> CORRECT!

I also attended events at the children's school.
>>> CORRECT!

The house and neighbors back then were much better than they are now.
>>> CORRECT!
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
133281 Homework : unit 13 ¹Ú*³ª ¿Ï·á 2023-12-16 2
133280 How does rain change your feelings? ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2023-12-16 1438
133279 Crime for good cause ¿°*¿¹ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-16 1
133278 HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about \\ ¾Ù* ¿Ï·á 2023-12-16 2
133277 homwork ¹Ú*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-16 1
133276 Homework Àå*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-15 2
133275 Do you think family gatherings are necessary? What do you enjoy... ÃÖ*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-15 1764
133274 What is your favorite food? Why? ¹®*Çö ¿Ï·á 2023-12-15 1414
133273 Do you like being at home alone? ¿¡*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-12-15 5
133272 homework 12.15 ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2023-12-15 1399
133271 Are you looking forward to any upcoming movies? What film do you... ÀÌ*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-12-15 1743
133270 Doing a half day ÀÌ*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2023-12-15 1210
133269 What is the nicest thing a classmate has said to you? ¼Û*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-12-15 986
133268 Homework ÀÌ*È­ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-15 1613
133267 homework Á¤*È£ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-15 1
133266 test sample Te*002 ÁøÇàÁß 2023-12-15 1477
133265 What springs to mind when you hear the word \'MONDAY\'? ±è*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-15 3
133264 Do you worry about cyber crime? Why? ±Ç*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-15 1633
133263 diary ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-15 1
133262 Should children be allowed to use social networking sites? ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2023-12-15 1995

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04