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Why do people love junk food?

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2023-05-23 484

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I think it's because people are busy so they don't have a time to eat. But they have to eat something, so they started to buy and eat junk food. And it can make with short time, also, it is so delicious. So I think that's why people love junk food.

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Hi, Daisy. ^_^
Thank you for finding the time to answer this question. 
I agree that people love junk food because it's convenient to eat and it has a delicious taste. 
However, we still need to be cautious when consuming this kind of food because it is not healthy and can cause a lot of diseases. 
Anyhow, healthy living is still the best. 
I hope you're having a great evening. ^^
See you in class later. :)
~Teacher Charry

I think it's because people are busy so they don't have a time to eat. 
>> I think it's because people are busy so they don't have time to eat. 
But they have to eat something, so they started to buy and eat junk food. 
>> CORRECT!
And it can make with short time, also, it is so delicious. 
>> In addition, they can prepare the food in a short time and it is so delicious. 
So I think that's why people love junk food.
>> CORRECT!
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