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Hello, T.Donna.
How was your symptom; coughing?
I am worring about your health.
Without you, who can teach me the best just like you?
Anyway, there was nothing special until now.
Technically, there was just one event.
Dr. MJ got mad to many people including me.
He couldn't control his temper for about 30 minutes.
Of course, we made many mistakes, but we didn't mean it.
Since he knew that, he became a normal state after about 30 minutes.
He really hate to be late and he always wants a immediate response.
Who can satisfy him?
Maybe his ex-wife and I can do that, but not everytime.
We had a meeting with our building's management company.
Two staff of that company came to us, and we talked about many things.
They were so polite and smart.
Thus, it made Dr.MJ feel better soon.
As you know, I have a dinner party this evening.
I am really looking forward to that time.
For me, the most exciting meeting means my people, good whiskey, and delicious foods.
See you tomorrow, if possible.

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Good evening, Dr. Kim!

My cough is gone and I can breathe so well now. I think I get sick like this every other month. Anyway, since I feel better today, I did so many things as usual-cook, clean, iron event clothes, do the laundry, among others. Thanks for your concern. In case I cannot teach you in the future, I know you can manage speaking English by yourself. Thank you so much by the way for registering once again, I appreciate it.

I wonder why Dr. MJ was so mad today. Sometimes, we take our frustrations to work or to other people when we cannot express ourselves naturally. Of course, we wear masks everyday. It just happens that Dr. MJ cannot pretend to wear the kind mask and he wears the honesty mask most of the time. Since you did not mean your mistakes, just try to execute processess better next time. Is he going to be satisfied? Well, Dr. MJ is the kind who can be insatiable. Thus, always know his threshold.

So, how was your dinner party? As of this writing, I can imagine you drinking a shot of whiskey on the rocks with some tasty dish. I hope that you will have a blast. If I do not see you in class tomorrow, I am sure that your Tuesday night was a blast!

Congratulations to all the correct sentences you made! Study a few suggestions when you can. CHEERS!

-T. Donna~

Hello, T.Donna.
>> Correct!

How was your symptom; coughing?
>> Correct!
Or: How is your cough symptom?

I am worring about your health.
>> Correct!

Without you, who can teach me the best just like you?
>> Correct!

Anyway, there was nothing special until now.
>> Correct!

Technically, there was just one event.
>> Correct!

Dr. MJ got mad to many people including me.
>> Correct!

He couldn't control his temper for about 30 minutes.
>> Correct!

Of course, we made many mistakes, but we didn't mean it.
>> Correct!

Since he knew that, he became a normal state after about 30 minutes.
>> Since he knew that, he was in a normal state after about 30 minutes.

He really hate to be late and he always wants a immediate response.
>> He really hates to be late and he always wants an immediate response.

Who can satisfy him?
>> Correct!

Maybe his ex-wife and I can do that, but not everytime.
>> Correct!

We had a meeting with our building's management company.
>> Correct!

Two staff of that company came to us, and we talked about many things.
>> Correct!

They were so polite and smart.
>> Correct!

Thus, it made Dr.MJ feel better soon.
>> Correct!

As you know, I have a dinner party this evening.
>> Correct!

I am really looking forward to that time.
>> Correct!

For me, the most exciting meeting means my people, good whiskey, and delicious foods.
>> Correct!

See you tomorrow, if possible.
>> Correct! 
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