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My memorable trip with mother is jeju island trip two years ago.
I cried a lot during these trip.
Because I must had to suddenly stay quarantine facilities in jeju island. Then I was separated a corona close contactor.
I spent time two week in facilities. I met my mother two week later.
And we could enjoy jeju island trip better than before isolation period.

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Hello there, Sae Bom!

Traveling with your mother might provide you the chance to learn more about her, how she feels in daily life and her life experiences. Listening to her stories and learning about her past will help you connect with her on a deeper level.
Enjoy all the memories with your mother as much as you can. 

- Kristine ^^

My memorable trip with mother is jeju island trip two years ago.
>> My mother and I took a memorable trip to Jeju Island two years ago.
I cried a lot during these trip.
>> I wept a lot during this trip.
Because I must had to suddenly stay quarantine facilities in jeju island. 
>> Because I had to stay in a quarantine facility on Jeju Island unexpectedly. 
Then I was separated a corona close contactor.
>> Then I was separated from the others who were infected from Corona virus.
I spent time two week in facilities. 
>> I spent two weeks in the facility.
I met my mother two week later.
>> I finally met my mother two weeks later.
And we could enjoy jeju island trip better than before isolation period.
>> We had much more fun on Jeju Island than we had before I was isolated.
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