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How will you describe your ideal guy?

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I want a guy who is taller tan me and thin and kind. Also I like a man who likes all of the kinds of music. I don't care about who is older or younger or same age with me but I prefer some guy who stimulates my protective instinct. It's because it is cute and I have a younger brother so I always take care of him and I liked this kinds of people.

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Good evening Daisy. :)
Thank you for finding the time to answer this question. 
It's really interesting that you want to be the one taking care of your special person instead of the other way around. 
That is a nice characteristic but it's also nice if he will take care of you too. 
Anyhow, I hope you're having a great evening. 
See you again tomorrow. ^_^ 
~Teacher Charry

I want a guy who is taller tan me and thin and kind. 
>> I want a guy who is taller than me; someone who is thin and kind. 
Also I like a man who likes all of the kinds of music. 
>> Also, I like a man who likes all kinds of music. 
I don't care about who is older or younger or same age with me but I prefer some guy who stimulates my protective instinct. 
>> I don't care about the age gap; whether he is older, younger or the same age as I am. However, I prefer a guy who stimulates my protective instinct. 
It's because it is cute and I have a younger brother so I always take care of him and I liked this kinds of people.
>> It's because it is cute and I have a younger brother so I always take care of him. I like this kind of person. 
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