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What is your favorite season and why?

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When I was younger, I prefered the summer than the winter. But not anymore due to a global warming. There're a lot of seasoned foods during the winter season. Grilled sweat potato, Bung Eo Bbang, Janchi noodle and etc. Especially, I really love a sweat potato grilled. I'd love to recommend you should try it, when you visit in here for the winter. And there's a festival of trout. You can catch that by your hand, also cooking it. Also I like to ride a ski for the winter season even if I can't do ski boards. :)

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Amazing Monday, Elic! The beautiful thing about learning is that no one can take it away from you. You don't have to be great to start, but you have to start to be great. Keep it up.

When I was younger, I prefered the summer than the winter. 
>>> When I was younger, I preferred the summer to the winter.

But not anymore due to a global warming.
>>> But not anymore due to global warming.

There're a lot of seasoned foods during the winter season.
>>> There are a lot of seasoned foods during the winter season.

Grilled sweat potato, Bung Eo Bbang, Janchi noodle and etc. 
>>> Grilled sweat potatoes, Bung Eo Bbang, Janchi noodles, etc.

Especially, I really love a sweat potato grilled. 
>>> I really love grilled sweet potato.

I'd love to recommend you should try it, when you visit in here for the winter.
>>> I'd love to recommend you try it when you visit here for the winter.

And there's a festival of trout.
>>> And we also have Trout Festival.

You can catch that by your hand, also cooking it.
>>> You can catch that with your hand while also cooking it.

Also I like to ride a ski for the winter season even if I can't do ski boards. 
>>> Also, I like to ride a ski during the winter season, even if I can't do ski boards.
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