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What is the best city to live in Korea?

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Without Seoul I'd love to recommend Gyeong Gi Do. There's the closest to Seoul and there're convenient public transportations, Kimpo domestic airport. However house's prices are similar to Seoul, so it's pretty expensive.

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Happy Friday, Elic! May your day be beautiful, may your weekend be joyful, and may all your moments be wonderful. 

Without Seoul I'd love to recommend Gyeong Gi Do.
>>> Except for Seoul, I'd love to recommend Gyeong Gi Do.

There's the closest to Seoul and there're convenient public transportations, Kimpo domestic airport.
>>> Gyeong Gi Do is the closest city to Seoul, and there are convenient public transportation options at the Kimpo domestic airport.

However house's prices are similar to Seoul, so it's pretty expensive.
>>> However, the house prices are similar to those in Seoul, so it's pretty expensive.
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