¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

tia

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*¼­
2023-05-19 1001

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Sorry. I was so tired yesterday.
I've decided to work until this month.
I don't know grammar well, so I think I'm falling behind in the academy, so I decided to study grammar first.

And I don't know the sentences I usually think of in English, so I translated them into English.
I have to choose one.
I need to focus on my studies.
I'm stressed out because of it.

Is that Sunday?
I need to stop procrastinating.
I am unemployed.
To eat leftovers from yesterday.
I have to run to build up my stamina

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello Tia,

Great job on completing your homework! I appreciate your effort and dedication. Making choices can sometimes be challenging, but trust yourself to make the best decision for your situation. Take your time, consider your options, and move forward with confidence. Focusing on your studies is essential for your academic success. Create a study routine, eliminate distractions, and set achievable goals to stay on track. Remember, your hard work and dedication will pay off in the long run.

~Teacher Cathy


Sorry. I was so tired yesterday.

>> Sorry, I was so tired yesterday.
I've decided to work until this month.

>> I've decided to work until the end of this month.

I don't know grammar well, so I think I'm falling behind in the academy, so I decided to study grammar first.
>>CORRECT

OR>> I don't know grammar well, so I think I'm falling behind in the academy. That's why I've decided to prioritize studying grammar.
And I don't know the sentences I usually think of in English, so I translated them into English.

>> Also, I struggle to come up with sentences in English, so I've translated them into English.

I have to choose one.

>> I need to make a choice.
I need to focus on my studies.

>>CORRECT

OR>> I need to concentrate on my studies.

I'm stressed out because of it.
>>CORRECT

OR>>I feel stressed because of it.
Is that Sunday?

>>Is today Sunday?
I need to stop procrastinating.

>> CORRECT
I am unemployed.

>> I am currently unemployed.
To eat leftovers from yesterday.

>> I should eat the leftovers from yesterday.
I have to run to build up my stamina

>> I need to start running to improve my stamina.

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
128308 I can teach!! ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-05-18 1113
128307 How has your country changed from five years ago? ¹Ú*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-05-18 1025
128306 What are the advantages of smart phone? ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2023-05-18 924
128305 Homework ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2023-05-18 0
128304 5/18 homework. ÃÖ*º½ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-18 1148
128303 homework ½Å*ÈÖ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-18 1305
128302 I like spring best ¾ç*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-18 1155
128301 Answer to \"What kind of greeting annoys you?\" ±è*Áø ¿Ï·á 2023-05-18 4
128300 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-18 1
128299 May.18 ¹Ú*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-18 1537
128298 15.May.2023 ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-18 1
128297 16.May.2023 ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-18 1
128296 My ways to look young ¼º*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-18 1066
128295 Is it important to prepare financially for old age? Á¶*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-05-18 3
128294 Homework Àå*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-18 1
128293 Homework ¼Û*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-05-17 882
128292 What are the advantages of smart phone? ¹è*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-17 1017
128291 homework 05.17 ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2023-05-17 777
128290 How do you prepare for an important examination? ±è*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2023-05-17 797
128289 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-05-17 582

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04