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Sorry. I was so tired yesterday.
I've decided to work until this month.
I don't know grammar well, so I think I'm falling behind in the academy, so I decided to study grammar first.

And I don't know the sentences I usually think of in English, so I translated them into English.
I have to choose one.
I need to focus on my studies.
I'm stressed out because of it.

Is that Sunday?
I need to stop procrastinating.
I am unemployed.
To eat leftovers from yesterday.
I have to run to build up my stamina

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Hello Tia,

Great job on completing your homework! I appreciate your effort and dedication. Making choices can sometimes be challenging, but trust yourself to make the best decision for your situation. Take your time, consider your options, and move forward with confidence. Focusing on your studies is essential for your academic success. Create a study routine, eliminate distractions, and set achievable goals to stay on track. Remember, your hard work and dedication will pay off in the long run.

~Teacher Cathy


Sorry. I was so tired yesterday.

>> Sorry, I was so tired yesterday.
I've decided to work until this month.

>> I've decided to work until the end of this month.

I don't know grammar well, so I think I'm falling behind in the academy, so I decided to study grammar first.
>>CORRECT

OR>> I don't know grammar well, so I think I'm falling behind in the academy. That's why I've decided to prioritize studying grammar.
And I don't know the sentences I usually think of in English, so I translated them into English.

>> Also, I struggle to come up with sentences in English, so I've translated them into English.

I have to choose one.

>> I need to make a choice.
I need to focus on my studies.

>>CORRECT

OR>> I need to concentrate on my studies.

I'm stressed out because of it.
>>CORRECT

OR>>I feel stressed because of it.
Is that Sunday?

>>Is today Sunday?
I need to stop procrastinating.

>> CORRECT
I am unemployed.

>> I am currently unemployed.
To eat leftovers from yesterday.

>> I should eat the leftovers from yesterday.
I have to run to build up my stamina

>> I need to start running to improve my stamina.

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