무료 레벨테스트 받고 강사평가 남기면 1,OOO원 쿠폰 즉시 적립!

혹시 사이트에선 찾지 못한 궁금한 점이 있으세요?
남겨주신 이메일을 통해 답변 드리겠습니다.

문의하신 내용이 문자로 발송되오니
연락처를 남겨주세요.
업무시간 월~금 오전9시~오후6시
(점심시간 낮12시~오후1시)

영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
회원님들께 무료로 제공해드리는 부가 서비스로, 전문 분야를 제외한 자유 주제
또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Homework

작성자: 김*우
2023-05-18 752

회원님의 영작문

Hey, T.Donna.
Now I am a little drunken.
I had a meeting with a pharmacist who is going to join our building.
Her husband is also pharmacist, and I met both of them today.
They are so friendly and humble.
As I told them about many things, they focused to my words.
Also, they seemed to know how to make others feel good.
We enjoyed a sumptious dinner in the luxurious japanese restaurant.
I am sure that she is going to run her drugstore very well.
Dr. MJ didn't join this meeting, so I reported them to him.
Dr.MJ also was satisfied with their polite attitude.
They even gave me a present; gift card.
Anyway, today was a good day for me.
Our previous house became having other owner.
Thus, I've got my guarrantee money from the owner.
I could pay some of my debt with that money.
And, it made me feel happier.
For me, money means freedom.
If I am free from the debt, I will be happier than now.
It's almost midnight.
I should take a shower and go to sleep now.
See you soon.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good morning, Dr. Kim!

Meeting the pharmacists who are also a couple is heaven sent. Two months ago when you just transferred in your new clinic, this was one of the things that you pointed out as a challenge since procuring medicine is not easy. Finally, after a couple of months, here they are. As you have described them as kind and good businessmen, I guess you are truly lucky to be in one building. I wish you both the best in you own businesses.

I hope that there will be more tenants occupying this building that will assist you in your clinic.

I strongly agree that money emancipates us from our worries of finacial constraints. After all, we all work so hard because of it. Hence, having money can set us free from the bondage of tasks. So, we have to learn not to be slaves of money by knowing how to compound and invest it wisely.

Go over my grammar suggestions. The frequency of your correct sentences is so high always. You did a great job! 

See you next week!

-T. Donna~

Hey, T.Donna.
>> Correct!

Now I am a little drunken.
>> Now I am a little drunk.

I had a meeting with a pharmacist who is going to join our building.
>> Correct!

Her husband is also pharmacist, and I met both of them today.
>> Her husband is also a pharmacist, and I met both of them today.

They are so friendly and humble.
>> Correct!

As I told them about many things, they focused to my words.
>> Correct!

Also, they seemed to know how to make others feel good.
>> Correct!

We enjoyed a sumptious dinner in the luxurious japanese restaurant.
>> Corect!
Or: We enjoyed a sumptious dinner in the luxurious Japanese restaurant.

I am sure that she is going to run her drugstore very well.
>> Correct!

Dr. MJ didn't join this meeting, so I reported them to him.
>> Correct!

Dr.MJ also was satisfied with their polite attitude.
>> Correct!

They even gave me a present; gift card.
>> Correct!
Or: They even gave me a present: a gift card.

Anyway, today was a good day for me.
>> Correct!

Our previous house became having other owner.
>> Our previous house has another owner.

Thus, I've got my guarrantee money from the owner.
>>Thus, I got my guarrantee money from the owner.  

I could pay some of my debt with that money.
>> Correct!

And, it made me feel happier.
>> Correct!

For me, money means freedom.
>> Correct!

If I am free from the debt, I will be happier than now.
>> If I am free from debt, I will be happier than now.

It's almost midnight.
>> Correct!

I should take a shower and go to sleep now.
>> Correct!

See you soon.
>> Correct!
번호 제목 글쓴이 공개 상태 등록일 조회수
130715 Homework 김*서 완료 2023-09-03 3
130714 Promoting 성*경 완료 2023-09-03 997
130713 Hi, Diviana 강*정 완료 2023-09-03 1
130712 homwork 조*준 완료 2023-09-03 561
130711 homwork 조*준 완료 2023-09-03 911
130710 homework 안*연 완료 2023-09-03 589
130709 Do you want to change anything on your appearance? 구*우 완료 2023-09-03 824
130708 How similar or different are you from your siblings? 구*우 완료 2023-09-03 718
130707 Are you always friendly? 구*우 완료 2023-09-03 786
130706 How is language barrier a problem in your productivity at work? 송*하 완료 2023-09-03 941
130705 Today\'s homework 이*도 완료 2023-09-02 1041
130704 Can you describe your current job? 신*섭 완료 2023-09-02 1293
130703 To improve myself 최*환 완료 2023-09-02 889
130702 Could you share what your study routine is? 이*윤 완료 2023-09-02 746
130701 What advice can you give to people who don\'t like to go out of... 정*화 완료 2023-09-02 922
130700 What do you think about transgender people being allowed to... 김*민 완료 2023-09-01 3
130699 homework 김*연 완료 2023-09-01 1211
130698 Homework 전*아 완료 2023-09-01 9
130697 Homework 전*아 완료 2023-09-01 489
130696 homework 09.01 최*� 완료 2023-09-01 806

HOW TO USE IT?

[마이페이지 > 수업 내용 보기 > 학습 캘린더 > 영작교정 버튼 클릭]

수업 횟수만큼 영작교정 게시판이 생성되며,
지난 날짜에도 게시 할 수 있습니다.

주5회 수업 : 월 20회 이용 가능
주3회 수업 : 월 12회 이용 가능
주2회 수업 : 월 08회 이용 가능
01
교정 내용은 최대 1,000byte까지 올릴 수 있습니다.

첨부 파일은 원활한 첨삭을 위한 참고자료로 사용될 뿐,
파일에 대한 첨삭은 불가능 합니다.

업로드 가능한 첨부 파일은 최대 2mb까지이며,
첨부 할 수 있는 파일 형식은 다음과 같습니다.

문서 - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
이미지 - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
전문 분야를 제외한 회원님이 직접 작성한 글만
첨삭이 가능하며,

올려주신 글의 강사님 첨삭은 24시간 이내에
완료 되는 것을 원칙으로 하고 있습니다.
03
하루 게시 가능한 글은 3회까지 이며,
종료된 수업의 영작교정 게시판은
이용이 어려운 점 양해 부탁 드립니다.
04

와이즈에듀케이션아이(주) 사이트명: 파워잉글리쉬 대표이사 전상현
사업자등록번호: 217-81-44736 통신판매신고번호: 2014-서울도봉-0233호
서울본사: 서울시 노원구 한글비석로 245 두타빌 B동 7층 713호
대표번호 1688-8672 개인정보관리 책임자: 안희영 [powerenglish@pweng.net]