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The first thing I consider when moving is the surroundings.
It shouldn't be dangerous for my daughters to go.
I like alcohol, but I avoid places with many bars.
Also avoid places with many narrow alleys.

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Eliana!
Hi there! thank you for this! I guess we cannot deny the fact that we parents have to consider many options even when we are moving in. 
Indeed, safety and security are our top priorities, who wants to live in a  dangerous neighborhood anyway.
Have good afternoon!
Aki~

The first thing I consider when moving is the surroundings.
>>> CORRECT!

It shouldn't be dangerous for my daughters to go.
>>> CORRECT!

I like alcohol, but I avoid places with many bars.
>>> CORRECT!

Also avoid places with many narrow alleys.
>>> I also avoid places with many narrow alleys.

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