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It\'s nice to see you again, too. Harmony~!

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First, thank you very much, harmony! And.. I'm sorry.. I was gonna take a week off and start over. But for the next time, I will certainly talk to you about that. I think that doing that is manner.
Answer : I think that the best part about being Korean is¡¦.so difficult. ¤»¤»¤»¤»
HANGEUL is very scientific and excellent language. But.. That is not world common lanuage.
KIMCHI is good for our body and very long historical traditional food for our. But people in the other countries alives well without that.
Hm¡¦I think that world rank first thing in our country is game industry.
you already know that. We play whatever game very well. (but I can't do that :) )
This may not be a big thing. But the game industry in the world is becoming huge.
And I have the question, too. what is the Philippines most proud of ?
I'm just curious.

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It's very nice and refreshing to read another homework answer from you again after a while.  I do agree that Korea has been a strong competitor against other countries when it comes to games. I guess it goes to show that you guys have the perseverance to work hard and give your best in everything you do.  With regards to your message, I understand that you were too busy to inform me about the sudden break, so I empathize with you. There's no need to apologize. ^^ As per your question, I also find it nice that you ask a question back to your teacher, which is something that none of my students have done so far except for you.  I think the Philippines is most proud of our own people, the Filipinos.  I have observed that my fellow Filipinos are hospitable, kind, friendly, talented, and can communicate well no matter where they go. I hope to be like them someday! 

Once again, thank you for answering your homework, Steven! 
~T.Harmony <3

I think that the best part about being Korean is¡¦.so difficult. ¤»¤»¤»¤»
>> CORRECT!
HANGEUL is very scientific and excellent language. 
>> CORRECT!
But.. That is not world common lanuage.
>> But that is not a globally used language.
KIMCHI is good for our body and very long historical traditional food for our. 
>> ...and has been a very long historical, traditional food for our country (?) - The sentence is incomplete here. ^^
But people in the other countries alives well without that.
>> But people in other countries can live well without eating that.
Hm¡¦I think that world rank first thing in our country is game industry.
>> Hm... I think that the gaming industry in our country is ranked first worldwide.
you already know that. 
>> CORRECT!
We play whatever game very well. (but I can't do that :) )
>> CORRECT! (That's very humble of you, Steven. Hahaha. ^^)
This may not be a big thing. 
>> CORRECT!
OR>> This may not be a big deal.
But the game industry in the world is becoming huge.
>> CORRECT!
And I have the question, too.
 >> And I have a question, too.
what is the Philippines most proud of ?
>> CORRECT!
I'm just curious.
>> CORRECT!
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