¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

It\'s nice to see you again, too. Harmony~!

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: Á¤*Èñ
2023-05-17 930

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

First, thank you very much, harmony! And.. I'm sorry.. I was gonna take a week off and start over. But for the next time, I will certainly talk to you about that. I think that doing that is manner.
Answer : I think that the best part about being Korean is¡¦.so difficult. ¤»¤»¤»¤»
HANGEUL is very scientific and excellent language. But.. That is not world common lanuage.
KIMCHI is good for our body and very long historical traditional food for our. But people in the other countries alives well without that.
Hm¡¦I think that world rank first thing in our country is game industry.
you already know that. We play whatever game very well. (but I can't do that :) )
This may not be a big thing. But the game industry in the world is becoming huge.
And I have the question, too. what is the Philippines most proud of ?
I'm just curious.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

It's very nice and refreshing to read another homework answer from you again after a while.  I do agree that Korea has been a strong competitor against other countries when it comes to games. I guess it goes to show that you guys have the perseverance to work hard and give your best in everything you do.  With regards to your message, I understand that you were too busy to inform me about the sudden break, so I empathize with you. There's no need to apologize. ^^ As per your question, I also find it nice that you ask a question back to your teacher, which is something that none of my students have done so far except for you.  I think the Philippines is most proud of our own people, the Filipinos.  I have observed that my fellow Filipinos are hospitable, kind, friendly, talented, and can communicate well no matter where they go. I hope to be like them someday! 

Once again, thank you for answering your homework, Steven! 
~T.Harmony <3

I think that the best part about being Korean is¡¦.so difficult. ¤»¤»¤»¤»
>> CORRECT!
HANGEUL is very scientific and excellent language. 
>> CORRECT!
But.. That is not world common lanuage.
>> But that is not a globally used language.
KIMCHI is good for our body and very long historical traditional food for our. 
>> ...and has been a very long historical, traditional food for our country (?) - The sentence is incomplete here. ^^
But people in the other countries alives well without that.
>> But people in other countries can live well without eating that.
Hm¡¦I think that world rank first thing in our country is game industry.
>> Hm... I think that the gaming industry in our country is ranked first worldwide.
you already know that. 
>> CORRECT!
We play whatever game very well. (but I can't do that :) )
>> CORRECT! (That's very humble of you, Steven. Hahaha. ^^)
This may not be a big thing. 
>> CORRECT!
OR>> This may not be a big deal.
But the game industry in the world is becoming huge.
>> CORRECT!
And I have the question, too.
 >> And I have a question, too.
what is the Philippines most proud of ?
>> CORRECT!
I'm just curious.
>> CORRECT!
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
129508 2023.7.13 homework ±è*»è ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 2997
129507 WRITING TASK: What are your ways to study more effectively? ÀÓ*Áö ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 2
129506 What are you really good at doing? ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 2403
129505 How can daily life support services positively impact the... Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 2329
129504 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 1531
129503 Homework Á¤*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 1022
129502 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 0
129501 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 946
129500 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 0
129499 HOMEWORK FOR 06/23 How important is it to wear a facemask when... ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 6
129498 Diary ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 0
129497 What crimes do you think will increase in the future? ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 0
129496 trend ±è*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 1
129495 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 0
129494 meet the new person. ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 1968
129493 What Korean food would you like recommend and why? ÀÌ*´Ã ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 1548
129492 How would you describe a perfect weekend? ÀÌ*´Ã ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 2649
129491 homework Àå*¼® ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 2023
129490 The biggest choice in my life! ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 1204
129489 Home work ±è*´Ô ¿Ï·á 2023-07-13 1595

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04