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Sharenting should not be the vanity and advertising of parents.

Specially the story of birth or sigle man story can become gossip for others.

After becoming an adult such stories on the internet might be shame to them.

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Good day, Ms. Lily!
People do not know that their actions now will affect their future. I hope that these parents who are so much fond of social media fame would realize that. 
Thank you for this. Talk to you later.
Aki~

Sharenting should not be the vanity and advertising of parents.
>>>  CORRECT!

Specially the story of birth or sigle man story can become gossip for others.
>>> Especially the story of birth or single man story can become gossip for others.

After becoming an adult such stories on the internet might be shame to them.
>>> After becoming an adult such stories on the internet might be a shame to them.
>>>  After becoming an adult such stories on the internet might be an embarrassment to them.
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