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What is interrupted sleep and what are the causes why your sleep is interrupted?
>>> Interrupted sleep is the state that can't sleep well, and my sleep is interrupted if it's too hot in summer night.

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Good morning, Steve!
There are many factors why we have interrupted sleep: External and internal factors. The external factors are manageable if the weather is too hot or cold, we can do adjustments to our surroundings, but what if it is internal? How do you manage this?
Thank you for writing your homework. see you!
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Interrupted sleep is the state that can't sleep well, and my sleep is interrupted if it's too hot in summer night.
>>> Interrupted sleep is the state where I can't sleep well, and my sleep is interrupted if it's too hot on summer nights.
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