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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
How could you decline offers of help politely?

The way I kindly refuse to help is simple.
I just say "I don't know" and I avoid him or her.
If I can't solve for perfect, I think it's better not to help.
If I say to them "I will must help for you"and but If I can't solve it, I will waste time and stress.
However, it is not easy to refuse help in Korea.
Almost young people use well smartphones and solve them quickly though internet searches.
But some older people don't use well.
Some older people they are not ask for help, that are ordering me to solve this problem.
Sometimes If I say no, they are grab my shoulder or hand.
And the same situation repeats.
In addition, if young people ask for help in Korea, it is better to refuse.
It's decreasing these days, but it is a organization that strange religion.

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Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
How could you decline offers of help politely?


The way I kindly refuse to help is simple.
>> CORRECT! 
I just say "I don't know" and I avoid him or her.
>> CORRECT! 
If I can't solve for perfect, I think it's better not to help.
>> If I can't solve something perfectly, I think it's better not to help.
If I say to them "I will must help for you"and but If I can't solve it, I will waste time and stress.
>> If I say to them "I will try to help you" but I can't solve it, I will waste time and stress.
However, it is not easy to refuse help in Korea.
>> CORRECT! 
Almost young people use well smartphones and solve them quickly though internet searches.
>> Most young people use smartphones well and solve them quickly though internet searches.
But some older people don't use well.
>> But some older people don't use it well.
Some older people they are not ask for help, that are ordering me to solve this problem.
>> Some older people do not ask for help, and order me to solve this problem.
Sometimes If I say no, they are grab my shoulder or hand.
>> Sometimes if I say no, they grab my shoulder or hand.
And the same situation repeats.
>> CORRECT! 
In addition, if young people ask for help in Korea, it is better to refuse.
>> CORRECT! 
It's decreasing these days, but it is a organization that strange religion.
>> It's decreasing these days, but it is an organization of a strange religion.

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