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Why do you think so many countries are eager to learn English?

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Why do you think so many countries are eager to learn English?
Modern society is competitional. Many people must learn about competition from young.
Maybe, in school students are compete with their friends at so many tests or athletic competition.
After, go into the world, have to compete with appliance for get a job. So, many people should shows their ability of foreign languages. Many of languages, English is very important and default in society. So many counties demand to understand English. Thus, many people can¡¯t help learning English.

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Thank you for this Hyo Won! Keep them coming. 

Modern society is competitional. 
>>> Modern society is competitive. 
Many people must learn about competition from young.
>>> Many people must learn about competition from a young age.   
Maybe, in school students are compete with their friends at so many tests or athletic competition.
>>> Maybe, in school, students compete with their friends at so many tests or athletic competitions.   
After, go into the world, have to compete with appliance for get a job. 
>>> After that, they go into the world and have to compete with applying to get a job.    
So, many people should shows their ability on foreign languages. 
>>>    correct
Many of languages, English is very important and default in society. 
>>> Of all languages, English is very important and default in society. 
So many counties demand to understand English. 
>>>  correct  
Thus, many people can¡¯t help learning English.
>>> correct   
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