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Because I have to wake up so early because of work these days. If you could add 2 more hours to me, I'd make 25 and 26 and sleep a little more. There are often times when I feel sleepy during the day because of lack of sleep.

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Good evening, Jin Yeong!

Your emotions, health, and brain function all benefit from getting enough sleep.
To preserve the best possible health and wellbeing, one must get adequate sleep. Similar to how exercise and a healthy diet can help avoid diseases like heart disease and depression, getting enough sleep can do the same.

Have a good night!^^

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Because I have to wake up so early because of work these days.
>>> I have to wake up so early because of work these days.
If you could add 2 more hours to me, I'd make 25 and 26 and sleep a little more.
>>> If I had 2 more hours, it would be 26 hours in a day, so I could sleep a little longer.
>>> OR: I could sleep a little longer if there were 2 extra hours in the day, making it 26 total.
There are often times when I feel sleepy during the day because of lack of sleep.
>>> There are often times when I feel sleepy during the day because of a lack of sleep.
>>> OR: I frequently feel sleepy during the day as a result of sleep deprivation.
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