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Hello, T.Donna.
I wonder what you are doing.
You always seem to be busier than me and enjoy your work like Dr. MJ.
Yesterday, two brother-in-law came to our new house.
One of them brought a good whiskey.
In spite of a good taste and flavor, I was not happy for that.
I feel melancholy these days,
Maybe, that's because I called my friends who got depressed disorders many times.
I feel vacant.
Dr.MJ, other friends, my wife and kids can't fill my vacant feeling these days.
I don't know the reason.
Do you know this feeling?
I think that I need a good motivation of my life.
Today the air outside is good.
I am considering opening the roof of my car.
As for my assignment, I feel very happy when I talk to foreigners with English.
I should've been a translator, instead of boring doctor.
If I can speak Enlish very well, I will be happier.
Have a nice weekend.
See you tomorrow.

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Hi there, Dr. Kim!

As of the time when you sent me this homework, I was enjoying emceeing a mall rock concert. I admit, I was nervous during the first five minutes. The last big concert I hosted was four years ago was before COVID-19. I always lose my voice after big concerts because I shout at the top of my lungs when I mention the name of the bands and performers and I have to wear uncomfortable clothes all the time. Well,it was all worth it and this gives me so much joy.

I am surprised that not even whiskey can make you happy these days. Perhaps it is the regularity of your activities everyday that makes you feel empty. Or maybe, you are surrounded by your friends having a hard time dealing with their own marital relationships. Sometimes, I want to suggest to you to be a little bit 'crazy' like D. MJ and break your routine to find out and experience new things, meet other people outside your medical circle, and just get lost in the moment. But then, the fact is, you live in South Korea and these things are easier said than done.

As we get older, we will learn more about ourselves and discover things that can make us happy. If you want to be a translator, it is never too late. You can be one. This may not necessarily be a profession but by helping others in a form of charity or help. Now that you speak English well, you can understand others or make others understand through your translation.

Your ideas were presented clearly and my grammar suggestions were simple ones. Go over them well.

See you soon.

-T. Donna ~

Hello, T.Donna.
>> Correct!

I wonder what you are doing.
>> Correct!

You always seem to be busier than me and enjoy your work like Dr. MJ.
>> Correct!

Yesterday, two brother-in-law came to our new house.
>> Yesterday, two brothers-in-law came to our new house.

One of them brought a good whiskey.
>> Correct!

In spite of a good taste and flavor, I was not happy for that.
>> In spite of the good taste and flavor, I was not happy of that.

I feel melancholy these days,
>> Correct!
Or: (Period at the end of the sentence.)

Maybe, that's because I called my friends who got depressed disorders many times.
>> Correct!

I feel vacant.
>> I feel empty.

Dr.MJ, other friends, my wife and kids can't fill my vacant feeling these days.
>> Correct!
Or: 
Dr.MJ, other friends, my wife and kids can't fill my empty feeling these days.


I don't know the reason.
>> Correct!

Do you know this feeling?
>> Correct!

I think that I need a good motivation of my life.
>> I think that I need a good motivation in my life.

Today the air outside is good.
>> Correct!

I am considering opening the roof of my car.
>> Correct!

As for my assignment, I feel very happy when I talk to foreigners with English.
>> Correct!
Or: As for my assignment, I feel very happy when I talk to foreigners in English.

I should've been a translator, instead of boring doctor.
>> I should've been a translator, instead of a boring doctor.

If I can speak Enlish very well, I will be happier.
>> Correct!
Or: English

Have a nice weekend.
>> Correct!

See you tomorrow.
>> Correct!
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