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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do you think is the most unusual food in your country?

There are various foods in Korea.
Well-known foods are Korean style prok belly, bibimbap, bulgogi, etc.
But there are also many food that are well known.
Korea food is either you like it or hate it.
Because most Korea foods are strong-tasting.
Anyway, I will introduce the unusual food.
The meaning of unusual is that this food have a story.
Food name is budae jjigae (Army stew or army base stew).
Today's budae jjigae has various ingredients.
It's includes kimchi, sausages, ham, vegetable, and noodles.
Budae is general term for a military base in Korean.
And Jjigae is a term for Korean style soup(stew).
This food is beginning made was in the past, there was nothing to eat, after the Korea-war.
Residents living near U.S military base began to gather and cook military food.
And then, Each region has different taste and recipe for Budaejjigae.
It is still one of the most popular foods

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do you think is the most unusual food in your country?

There are various foods in Korea.
>> There are various food in Korea.
Well-known foods are Korean style prok belly, bibimbap, bulgogi, etc.
>> Well-known food are Korean-style pork belly, bibimbap, bulgogi, etc.
But there are also many food that are well known.
>> CORRECT! 
Korea food is either you like it or hate it.
>> In Korea, it is either you like the food, or hate it.
Because most Korea foods are strong-tasting.
>> It is because most Korean food have a strong taste.
Anyway, I will introduce the unusual food.
>> Anyway, I will introduce an unusual food.
The meaning of unusual is that this food have a story.
>> This unusual food has an interesting story.
Food name is budae jjigae (Army stew or army base stew).
>> The food's name is budae jjigae (Army stew or army base stew).
Today's budae jjigae has various ingredients.
>> CORRECT! 
It's includes kimchi, sausages, ham, vegetable, and noodles.
>> It includes kimchi, sausages, ham, vegetable, and noodles.
Budae is general term for a military base in Korean.
>> "Budae" is a general term for military base in Korean.
And Jjigae is a term for Korean style soup(stew).
>> CORRECT! 
This food is beginning made was in the past, there was nothing to eat, after the Korea-war.
>> This food's beginning was made in the past, there was nothing to eat, after the Korean war.
Residents living near U.S military base began to gather and cook military food.
>> CORRECT! 
And then, Each region has different taste and recipe for Budaejjigae.
>> And then, each region has different tastes and recipes for Budae jjigae.
It is still one of the most popular foods.
>> It is still one of the most popular food in Korea.

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