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What places in your country would you recommend for foreign tourists?

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What places in your country would you recommend for foreign tourists?

Korea has many attractive places. Among them, I recommended city is ¡°Gangwon do¡±.
This city is located the east sea. So, there are many seas food, and has many beaches.
Most of all ¡°Yang-yang beach¡± is filming site of BTS¡¯s music video. So, this beach has many tourists. Another popular beach name is ¡°Young jin beach¡±. This place is filming site of Korea drama ¡°goblin¡±.
So many people visited this place and copied a drama scene. A female main character putted on red muffler, male main character has flower on his hand. And they are face each other. People¡¯s take picture like this scene. So, nearby this place, many sellers to sell red muffler, and flowers!
This area has many temples. Especially ¡°Naksan¡± temple is very famous to people. I went to this place, that is so wonderful landscape! and behind of temple, located hotel, this place is very beautiful too.
If you have a time, visit to "Gangwon do" at once~

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Thank you for this Hyo Won. K-dramas are indeed popular to many people.

Korea has many attractive places. 
>>>  correct
Among them, I recommended city is ¡°Gangwon do¡±.
>>> Among them, the city I recommended is ¡°Gangwon do¡±.  
>>> OR: Among them, I recommended the city of ¡°Gangwon do¡±.
This city is located the east sea. 
>>>  This city is located in the east sea.
So, there are many seas food, and has many beaches.
>>> So, there are many seafood and has many beaches. 
Most of all, ¡°Yang-yang beach¡± is the filming site of BTS¡¯s music video. 
>>> correct 
So, this beach has many tourists. 
>>>  correct
Another popular beach name is ¡°Young jin beach¡±. 
>>> correct 
This place is filming site of Korea drama ¡°goblin¡±.
>>>  This place is the filming site of the Korean drama ¡°goblin¡±.
So many people visited this place and copied a drama scene. 
>>> correct  
A female main character putted on red muffler, male main character has flower on his hand. 
>>> A female main character put on a red muffler, male main character has flowers on his hand.  
>>> OR:  The female main character wears a red muffler and the male main character has flowers on his hand.  
And they are face each other. 
>>And they are facing each other.  
People¡¯s take picture like this scene. 
>>> People take pictures mimicing this scene. 
So, nearby this place, many sellers to sell red muffler, and flowers!
>>So, nearby this place, many sellers are selling red mufflers and flowers! 
This area has many temples. 
>>> correct  
Especially ¡°Naksan¡± temple is very famous to people. 
>>> correct  
I went to this place, that is so wonderful landscape! and behind of temple, located hotel, this place is very beautiful too.
>>> I went to this place and it is such a wonderful landscape! Behind the temple is a hotel, this place is very beautiful too. 
If you have a time, visit to "Gangwon do" at once~
>>>  correct
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