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What are the things you are accountable for? State three situations.
>>> I am a college student, so I am accountable for several things. First, I have to attend the class that I registered at the beginning of the semester. Second, if professor give me an assignment, I have to finish it on time. Lastly, I have to pay a registration fee to go to college.

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Good morning Steve!
I appreciate your effort in writing your homework. You wrote your sentences correctly except for the third part which is easily manageable. keep practicing your skill and it will pave the way for greater improvement. have a great day!
T. Aki~

 I am a college student, so I am accountable for several things. 
>>> CORRECT!

First, I have to attend the class that I registered at the beginning of the semester. 
>>> CORRECT!

Second, if professor give me an assignment, I have to finish it on time. 
>>> Second, if the professor gives me an assignment, I have to finish it on time. 

Lastly, I have to pay a registration fee to go to college.
>>> CORRECT!

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