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What is your favorite holiday and why?

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My favorite holiday is Halloween,Christmas, Hangl's day and National foundation day.
Halloween is spooky and interesting. Beacause there is a spooky characters.
And there is also Chiristmas too. Beacause Santa claus came to our home.
And Hangl's day is king segong made it. Beacause it's for us.
And also National fondation day is our first city is found a .state. Beacause it's for us.
These are my favorite holidays.

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Hi Henry!

You answered your homework so fast! Keep it up! See you next week and enjoy the holiday ^^

T. DON

What is your favorite holiday and why?

My favorite holiday is Halloween,Christmas, Hangl's day and National foundation day.
>> My favorite holidays are Halloween,Christmas, Hangl's day and National foundation day.

Halloween is spooky and interesting. Beacause there is a spooky characters.
>> Halloween is spooky and interesting because there are spooky characters.

And there is also Chiristmas too. Beacause Santa claus came to our home.
>> And I also like Christmas because Santa Claus came to our home to give us gifts.

And Hangl's day is king segong made it. Beacause it's for us.
>> Hangul's day was made by King Sejong to celebrate the invention and announcement of Hangul, the Korean alphabet.

And also National fondation day is our first city is found a .state. Beacause it's for us.
>> The  last holiday that is my favorite is the National foundation day because this holiday let us celebrate the formation of the first Korean state.

These are my favorite holidays.
>> CORRECT

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