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What are popular small businesses in your country?

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I believe popular small businesses in South Korea are coffee shop, restaurant of chicken and PC caffe shop. I've been living in Korea, I've never seen people who don't like chicken. That's why restaurant of chicken has been popular. Also, coffee too. And PC caffe shop, you know?, Korea is a strong country of e-sports like any games. Because there're a lot of PC caffe shop in here. when you visited here, you can see that easily. :)

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Good day to you, Elic! Life is all about new opportunities and the chances it has to offer. Never let go of opportunities and be afraid of taking new chances. All the best wishes.

I believe popular small businesses in South Korea are coffee shop, restaurant of chicken and PC caffe shop.
>>> I believe popular small businesses in South Korea are coffee shops, chicken restaurants, and PC coffee shops.

I've been living in Korea, I've never seen people who don't like chicken.
>>> I've been living in Korea, and I've never seen people who don't like chicken.

That's why restaurant of chicken has been popular.
>>> That's why restaurants serving chicken have been popular.

Korea is a strong country of e-sports like any games.
>>> Korea is a strong country for e-sports, like any game.

Because there're a lot of PC caffe shop in here. when you visited here, you can see that easily. :)
>>> Because there are a lot of PC coffee shops in here. When you visited here, you could see that easily.
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