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The chance fells very difficult to me. I think it's an chance that comes to everyone, but not everyone can catch it. There is no right answer in life, so there is no way to know if I missed the chance. In that sense, I also think that chance is regret.

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Hi there, Jin Yeong! ^^,)

Seize the chance because it doesn't happen often.
Success will undoubtedly follow if we are successful in seizing the appropriate opportunity at the right moment.

Thank you for answering you homework.
Enjoy your holiday!^^

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The chance fells very difficult to me.
>>> I think "chance" is being hard on me.
I think it's an chance that comes to everyone, but not everyone can catch it.
>>> I think it's a chance that comes to everyone, but not everyone can catch it.
There is no right answer in life, so there is no way to know if I missed the chance.
>>> There is no right answer in life, so there is no way to know if I missed the chance.
In that sense, I also think that chance is regret.
>>> I also believe that chance is remorse in this regard.
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