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In my opinion, the soccer playing need to strong power and stamina.
But the women usually have weak power than men.
For this reason, men usually like soccer playing than women.

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Have a wonderful day, Sae Bom! 

Gender equality in sport means breaking down the harmful stereotypes that continue to make women less likely to take up sporting activities. It also means promoting women's advancement as professional athletes and leaders in the sport sector. What do you think about it?

- Kristine ^^


In my opinion, the soccer playing need to strong power and stamina.
>> In my opinion, soccer payers must have great strength and stamina.
But the women usually have weak power than men.
>> However, women typically have less power than men.
For this reason, men usually like soccer playing than women.
>> For this reason, men like playing soccer more than women.
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