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My country of birthday traditions culture is first birthday
On my First birthday has to choose from many things

There are thread pencil money mike
Thread is meaning wish good health long life
Pencil is meaning study well
Money means Richman
Mike means hope to be a famous singer and actor
I have chosen thread I heard that my mom
My oldest daughter have chosen pencil
My younger daughter have chosen money

I don't believe it

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Fantastic Tuesday, Kay! Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Have faith in yourself because I have faith in you. Good luck to you. Everything seems impossible until it is done.


My country of birthday traditions culture is first birthday
>>> My country's birthday traditions and culture are first birthdays.

On my First birthday has to choose from many things
>>> On my first birthday, I have to choose from many things.

There are thread pencil money mike
>>> There are threads, pencils, money, and a mic.

Thread is meaning wish good health long life
>>> The meaning of thread is to have good health and a long life.

Pencil is meaning study well
>>> Pencil means "study well."

Money means Richman
>>> Money means riches.

Mike means hope to be a famous singer and actor
>>> Mic means "I hope to be a famous singer and actor."

I have chosen thread I heard that my mom
>>> I chose the thread.

My oldest daughter have chosen pencil
>>> My oldest daughter has chosen a pencil.

My younger daughter have chosen money
>>> My younger daughter has chosen money.

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