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1. be bombed / the war / the castle / heavily / during
During the war, the castle was bombed heavily.
2. we / all the scraps / that / to throw away / gave / to the geese / were ready
We were ready to throw away that all the scraps gave to the geese.
3. read / in the paper / the burglar / I / that / caught / had been
I read in the paper that the burglar had been caught.
4. at a thousand / the mountain / flying / I / feet / could see / clearly
I could see clearly the mountain feet flying at a thousand.
5. uncertain / I am / to bring / leave / I / for France / what / when
What I am uncertain when I leave to bring for France.

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Hello Jane,

I know you can improve your skills...just be confident that you can do it!!!

Grammar is one of the most important concepts in human communication, so we need to fix the basics so that we can communicate well using the English language.

Take care and thank you!!!!

Sorry I didn't remember that I gave this homework already. My bad.

T. Jeny


1. be bombed / the war / the castle / heavily / during
During the war, the castle was bombed heavily.
>>correct
OR>>The castle was heavily bombed during the war.
2. we / all the scraps / that / to throw away / gave / to the geese / were ready
We were ready to throw away that all the scraps gave to the geese.
>>We gave all the scraps that were ready to throw away to the geese.
3. read / in the paper / the burglar / I / that / caught / had been

I read in the paper that the burglar had been caught.
>>correct
4. at a thousand / the mountain / flying / I / feet / could see / clearly

I could see clearly the mountain feet flying at a thousand.
>>Flying at a thousand feet I could clearly see the mountain.
5. uncertain / I am / to bring / leave / I / for France / what / when
What I am uncertain when I leave to bring for France.
>>I am uncertain what to bring when I leave for France.
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