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It has been few years that many countries are interested in our culture. There are many singers and actors who have actively worked in Asia but they were not popular in Europe and America. However, people in the world have started to get interested in Korean celebrities since BTS were ranked 1st prize in billboard chart in the USA. BTS has became one of the most powerful boy group in the world and have already hold a lot of world tour concerts. Korea has become a country where people would like to visit and many people want to know about Korea culture from food to cosmetics. Koreans know very well about the power of cultural exchanges these days because we have experienced positive changes a lot. Actually, western people didn't welcome Asian people, there was a serious racism but many people are friendly to us and want to socialize with us. I believe that it is the result of cultural exchanges. It is quite weird that foreigners are waiting new serious of Korean drama and have watched

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

It has been few years that many countries are interested in our culture. 
>> CORRECT!
There are many singers and actors who have actively worked in Asia but they were not popular in Europe and America. 
>> CORRECT!
However, people in the world have started to get interested in Korean celebrities since BTS were ranked 1st prize in billboard chart in the USA. 
>> CORRECT!
BTS has became one of the most powerful boy group in the world and have already hold a lot of world tour concerts. 
>> BTS has become one of the most powerful boy groups in the world and have already hold a lot of world tour concerts. 
Korea has become a country where people would like to visit and many people want to know about Korea culture from food to cosmetics. 
>> Korea has become a country where people would like to visit and many people want to know about the Korean culture, from food to cosmetics. 
Koreans know very well about the power of cultural exchanges these days because we have experienced positive changes a lot. 
>> CORRECT!
Actually, western people didn't welcome Asian people, there was a serious racism but many people are friendly to us and want to socialize with us. 
>> CORRECT!
I believe that it is the result of cultural exchanges. 
>> CORRECT!
It is quite weird that foreigners are waiting new serious of Korean drama and have watched
>> It is quite weird that foreigners are waiting for new series of Korean dramas, and have watched  most of them in different platforms, like Netflix in particular.

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