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Being able to spend the rest of your life without sleeping means that you have unlimited physical strength. If such a moment comes, I will no longer live with plans. Because I don't sleep, so I can always work when I need it, eat when I need it, and always do what I want to do. I don't think I need to plan my life.

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Good evening, Jin Yeong!

Imagine living in a society where you didn't need to sleep and could utilize the full 24 hours of each day.
Wouldn't it be wonderful if you had an additional eight hours to complete some housekeeping, play more games, unwind, and watch your preferred television programs?

Everyone would continue doing what they are now doing and building on what is already there if given additional time.

Nothing would truly change, but it would all become more extreme.

Thank you for accomplishing your homework. See you tomorrow!^^

__T. Mayleen :)


Being able to spend the rest of your life without sleeping means that you have unlimited physical strength.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: Your physical strength is limitless if you can go the remainder of your life without sleeping.
If such a moment comes, I will no longer live with plans.
>>> CORRECT
Because I don't sleep, so I can always work when I need it, eat when I need it, and always do what I want to do. I don't think I need to plan my life.
>>> It's because if I don't sleep, I can always work when I need it, eat when I need it, and always do what I want to do. I don't think I need to plan my life.
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