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1. be bombed / the war / the castle / heavily / during
The castle was bombed heavily during the war.
2. we / all the scraps / that / to throw away / gave / to the geese / were ready
We were ready to throw away  all the scraps that gave to the geese.
3. read / in the paper / the burglar / I / that / caught / had been
I read that the burglar had been caught in the paper.
4. at a thousand / the mountain / flying / I / feet / could see / clearly
I could see the mountain clearly at a thousand feet flying.
5. uncertain / I am / to bring / leave / I / for France / what / when
I am uncertain what to bring when I leave for France.

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Hello May,

I know you can improve your skills...just be confident that you can do it!!!

Grammar is one of the most important concepts in human communication, so we need to fix the basics so that we can communicate well using the English language.

Take care and thank you!!!!

T. Jeny


1. be bombed / the war / the castle / heavily / during
The castle was bombed heavily during the war.
>>Correct
OR>>The castle was heavily bombed during the war.
2. we / all the scraps / that / to throw away / gave / to the geese / were ready
We were ready to throw away  all the scraps that gave to the geese.
>>We gave all the scraps that were ready to throw away to the geese.
3. read / in the paper / the burglar / I / that / caught / had been

I read that the burglar had been caught in the paper.
>>Correct
OR>>I read in the paper that the burglar had been caught.
4. at a thousand / the mountain / flying / I / feet / could see / clearly
I could see the mountain clearly at a thousand feet flying.
>>Flying at a thousand feet I could clearly see the mountain.
5. uncertain / I am / to bring / leave / I / for France / what / when

I am uncertain what to bring when I leave for France.
>>Correct
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