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I think that is not bad.
Because I'm all ways same reaction, so my friends are not disloyal.
If they being disloyal, I think maybe I'm something missing they's events or I don't listen they's story.
So I don't care and if they being disloyal, I think that is my mistake.

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Hi Da Hye,

Thank you for doing your homework and I think you're doing great. It's good to have a positive attitude towards situations and not be too affected by negative things. However, it's important to remember that if your friends are being disloyal, it may not be your fault. It's always good to communicate with them and listen to their stories, but it's also important to set boundaries and make sure you're being treated with respect. Keep up the good work and keep learning English!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I think that is not bad.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I don¡¯t think that is bad.

Because I'm all ways same reaction, so my friends are not disloyal.

>>Because I always have the same reaction, so my friends are not disloyal.

If they being disloyal, I think maybe I'm something missing they's events or I don't listen they's story.

>>If they are being disloyal, I think maybe I miss their events or I don¡¯t listen to their story.

So I don't care and if they being disloyal, I think that is my mistake.

>>So, I don¡¯t care if they are being disloyal, I think that is my mistake.

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