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I like to sew.
I also made clothes for my children when they were young.
Now that the kids are grown up, they like to buy clothes that suit their taste rather than clothes made of them.
So these days, I make doll clothes, put them on, take pictures, and record them on Instagram.

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Good morning, Eliana!!!
Wow, I discovered a new side of you! You are very talented. Do you sell those?
I hope that you will continue to do your passion.. I guess that makes you really happy!
Thank you for sharing your thought in the form of writing. Have a happy day!
Aki~


I like to sew.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> I like sewing.

I also made clothes for my children when they were young.
>>> CORRECT!

Now that the kids are grown up, they like to buy clothes that suit their taste rather than clothes made of them.
>>>  Now that my kids are grown up, they like to buy clothes that suit their taste rather than the clothes that I made for them.

So these days, I make doll clothes, put them on, take pictures, and record them on Instagram.
>>> CORRECT!
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