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The biggest change how families are in Korea

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Most of Korean live with parents until high school student. College is in Seoul so young generation go to Seoul for going to college. So the memory with parents is defined until high school student. But in those memories there aren¡¯t good memory. We always studied hard to go to good schoold and get better grades. So point is it is important stuck good memory in childhood because it might be the last.

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Good day, Mark! Thank you for sharing this information with me. You openly express your thoughts about what Korean family is like. You also give details about the memories you remember when you were with your parents. We will talk more about this in class. Have a wonderful to you and take care!~ T. Lyn
Most of Korean live with parents until high school student. 
>>Most Koreans live with their parents until high school.
College is in Seoul so young generation go to Seoul for going to college. 
>>Most universities are located in Seoul, the younger generation goes Seoul to attend school.
So the memory with parents is defined until high school student. 
>>So memories with parents are defined until high school.
But in those memories there aren¡¯t good memory. 
>>But I think, most of those memories aren't good.
We always studied hard to go to good schoold and get better grades. 
>>It is because we always studied hard, went to school in order to get better grades.
So point is it is important stuck good memory in childhood because it might be the last.
>>So the point is, it's important to instill good memories in childhood because they can't last longer.
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