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No, I haven't.
>> GOOD!
I think the effect of diet supplement is very inadequate.
>> 
I think the effect of diet supplements is very inadequate.
So when i was on diet, I do aerobic exercises.
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So when I am on a diet, I do aerobic exercises as well.
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