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How did you acquire your driver's license?
>>> First, I took a theory test on computer. Next, I practiced driving on the mini track in a driving academy. Finally, I took a driving test on the real road. I was really nervous, but I succeeded it.

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Great day, Steve!
Thank you for sharing how you acquire your driver's license. You did well on your sentence construction except for that tiny "a" that you missed including in your sentence. Have a great time!
T. Aki~

First, I took a theory test on computer.
>>> First, I took a theory test on a computer.

Next, I practiced driving on the mini track in a driving academy. 
>>> CORRECT!

Finally, I took a driving test on the real road. I was really nervous, but I succeeded it.
>>> CORRECT!
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