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Do you think foreign language study should start as early as possible, or is it okay to start later?
>>> I think it is better to study foreign language as early as possible. As we get older, it becomes harder to change our speaking habit.

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Thank you once again for writing your homework. Please try expanding your sentence construction to two or three sentences. Don't be afraid of expressing yourself.
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I think it is better to study foreign language as early as possible. As we get older, it becomes harder to change our speaking habit.
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