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What is the best way to help a friend or relative who is in poverty?

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Well, I guess if I have a lot of money, there's no way to give them money. But not, you should say the good things. For example, no worries, good things will happen to you and there's no such thing as an ordeal. Sometimes, light words can comfort you.
Last one, I was a pleasure to have a class with you last night. :)

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Hi, Elic! ^_^
Thank you for diligently answering this essay question. I agree that giving encouragements and positive words to our friends or relatives who are financially struggling are helpful. 
I wish money grow on trees so I can give my poor friends and relatives money. LOL. 
Anyhow, I am happy to hear that you enjoyed studying with me last night. I wish you all the best in your journey in studying the English language. ^^
See you again next time! :)
~Teacher Charry

Well, I guess if I have a lot of money, there's no way to give them money. 
>>  [Do you mean]: Well, I guess if I have a lot of money, I can give them some but I don't so there's no way for me to give them money. 
But not, you should say the good things. 
>> [Do you mean]: Since I don't have any money, I should encourage them. 
For example, no worries, good things will happen to you and there's no such thing as an ordeal. 
>> For example I can tell them, " Don't worry, good things will happen to you and there's no such thing as eternal ordeal". 
Sometimes, light words can comfort you.
>> CORRECT!
Last one, I was a pleasure to have a class with you last night. :)
>> Lastly, I had pleasure having a class with you last night. :)
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