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회원님의 영작문

Good afternoon, T. Donna.
As you predicted, there were lots of patients and clients in the clinic this morning, which means high profits for us.
Hence, Dr. MJ seems to be so happy.
During our lunch time, he enjoyed the lunch box with a big admiration.
Although he always tell me that he really wants to make a huge amounts of money, I believe that all he needs is just delicious food.
Lately, I have tried to listen to the articles on Power English Website, but I found it was too difficult for me to understand.
How can I improve my listening and reading skill?
You know my level and situation(I am so busy), so please let me know how to do it efficiently.
Meanhwhile, it's sunny and the air is fresh the best, and it makes me want to go out.
Daytime drinking is the best thing.
As for my assignment, I have a talent to talk to anyone natually and smoothly in any situation.
According to my wife and Dr.MJ, I could've been a pastor or lawyer.
Have a good day, see you soon.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good evening, Dr. Kim!

When Dr. MJ is happy, it seems that everybody is happy. I think that Dr. MJ can only eat well if the profits are high. ^^ Congratualtions for having a remarkable day in your clinic! It is consistent, sustainable, and growing stonger.

Meanwhile, listening skills is intentional and truly demands attention. It needs so much effort like speaking and it can be improved by constantly consuming English materials- news, music, drama, and YouTube contents. In my case, I started pretty early at the age of  4 and never stopped consumption even until today. Thus, your listening skills can level up by tuning in to an English material 2-3 minutes everyday. You can choose a material that best suits and interests you.

Did you have a daytime drink? If you did, cheers!

As your wife and Dr. MJ stated, you are someone who can preach and influence others to do good. Your tone, calm voice, and facial features will definitely pass for a pastor or lawyer. However, in reality, you are still the best being a doctor.

Have a very good dinner and see you tomorrow!

-T. Donna~

Good afternoon, T. Donna.
>> Correct!

As you predicted, there were lots of patients and clients in the clinic this morning, which means high profits for us.
>> Correct!

Hence, Dr. MJ seems to be so happy.
>> Correct!

During our lunch time, he enjoyed the lunch box with a big admiration.
>> Correct!

Although he always tell me that he really wants to make a huge amounts of money, I believe that all he needs is just delicious food.
>> Although he always tells me that he really wants to make a huge amounts of money, I believe that all he needs is just delicious food.

Lately, I have tried to listen to the articles on Power English Website, but I found it was too difficult for me to understand.
>> Correct!

How can I improve my listening and reading skill?
>> How can I improve my listening and reading skills?

You know my level and situation(I am so busy), so please let me know how to do it efficiently.
>> Correct!

Meanhwhile, it's sunny and the air is fresh the best, and it makes me want to go out.
>> Meanhwhile, it's sunny and the air is fresh at its best, and it makes me want to go out.

Daytime drinking is the best thing.
>> Correct!

As for my assignment, I have a talent to talk to anyone natually and smoothly in any situation.
>> Correct!

According to my wife and Dr.MJ, I could've been a pastor or lawyer.
>> Correct!

Have a good day, see you soon.
>> Correct!
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