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I think that they need to wear school uniform.
When they got university school, they don¡¯t need that. But they are middle or high school, they must wear school uniform.
Because they know the clothes information. Which clothes is expensive or not. So that they can be frustrated. And also they have bad behavior.
So that reason I think that student need to wear school uniform.

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I think that they need to wear school uniform.

>>Correct.
When they got university school, they don¡¯t need that. 

>>When they go to a university, they won't need that.

But they are middle or high school, they must wear school uniform.

>>But if they are still in middle or high school, they must wear school uniforms.
Because they know the clothes information. 

>>Because they would know how clothes cost.

Which clothes is expensive or not. 

>>Which clothes are expensive or not.

So that they can be frustrated.

>>So, they can be frustrated.

 And also they have bad behavior.

>>And also they have a bad behavior towards it.
So that reason I think that student need to wear school uniform.

>>So that's the reason why I think students must wear school uniforms.

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