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I haven't experience that situation before so it can't be sure.
Maybe someone had been gossiping about me, but I haven't knon about that until now.
In my opinion, I may not confront them because.. I think it is outrageous that everybody likes me.
So I will do nothing because there is nothing to be changed into better situations even though I confront them.
And I will find my friends who loves me and just have a good time with them.
I couldn't do like this when I was young like a teenager, but after I graduated the university, I was changed.
(It's because the university is a very personal and indivisual community. So many students grab some food alone, go to school alone,
have lectures alone, and even live alone. I think an university is different from high school or middle school.)
Ah, but if I heard about someone had been gossiping about me, I would tell my mother and we would gossiping about them together.

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Hello Gem!
I think that you are such a kind person to ignore those kind of people! I would have been mad if it were me haha. Anyway, thanks for the effort today! ^^
~~Teacher Kate 
I haven't experience that situation before so it can't be sure.
>>I haven't experienced that situation before so I can't be sure.
Maybe someone had been gossiping about me, but I haven't knon about that until now.
>>Maybe someone had been gossiping about me, but I haven't found out about that until now.
In my opinion, I may not confront them because.. I think it is outrageous that everybody likes me.
>>In my opinion, I may not confront them because I think it is outrageous to believe that everybody likes me.
So I will do nothing because there is nothing to be changed into better situations even though I confront them.
>>So I will do nothing because nothing will change even though I confront them.
And I will find my friends who loves me and just have a good time with them.
>>And I will find my friends who love me and just have a good time with them.
I couldn't do like this when I was young like a teenager, but after I graduated the university, I was changed.
>>I couldn't do this when I was young like when I was a teenager, but after I graduated the university, I changed.
(It's because the university is a very personal and indivisual community. So many students grab some food alone, go to school alone, have lectures alone, and even live alone. I think an university is different from high school or middle school.)
>>It's because the university is a very personal and individual community. So many students grab some food alone, go to school alone, have lectures alone, and even live alone. I think university life is different from high school or middle school life.)
Ah, but if I heard about someone had been gossiping about me, I would tell my mother and we would gossiping about them together.
>>Ah, but if I heard that someone had been gossiping about me, I would tell my mother and we would gossip about them together. (NOTE: Wah, that sounds fun haha! )
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