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Hi, T.Donna.
Since it's raining outside, there was only few patients in the clinic today.
Because of low profit and fewer patients, Dr. MJ seems to be upset, so I'm trying not to make him feel worse.
Last night, Dr MJ attended the meeting of aesthetic Academy and learned many items there.
Of course, he shared those items with me this morning.
He really wanted to apply new treatment of nail disorders until this month, and I have no reason to disagree with him
Hence, we have no time to be hesitate.
Next Monday is Labor Day, so after a long time, I can take a rest.
I am going to spend time with my family, and It will be comforting to me.
Honesty is a child's character, I think.
And, Dr. MJ is quite honesty for money, and That is his good weapon, I think.
He seems to be really happy, when he eat some delicious food.
At times, I forget to express my joyful emotion, though.
Joy, gratitude, and happiness.
We might feel these emotions easier, if we can keep our childlike mind.
See you.

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Good evening, Dr. Kim!

It seems like East and Southeast Asia are overcast with clouds bringing rains nowadays. If tomorrow, the sun will shine, Dr. MJ's face is going to beam like the sun rays. More remarkably, updating your treatment innovations during these times when patients are not flocking by is a very good idea.

It is interesting to know what nail treatment are available in your clinic. Could they really be fixed? I have a cousin who's nails looked weird since we were kids and they are still the same today. 

As you noted in class today, the month of May marks a lot of days off: Children's Day is on May 5 and Buddha's birthday is on May 27. Even so, we still have classes that time.

When a person is childlike, they possess the following qualities: They trust people easily. They are innocent, sweet, simple and pure. However, this is not what I meant in class. As you also pointed out below, honesty or truth is hard to fake in many aspects of our lives. So let us be honest about the words we say or feel to ourselves and others.

Thank you for your early homework submission. The underscored grammar pointers will help you master some simple grammar rules. Great job!

-T. Donna~

Hi, T.Donna.
>> Correct!

Since it's raining outside, there was only few patients in the clinic today.
>> Since it's raining outside, there was only a few patients in the clinic today.

Because of low profit and fewer patients, Dr. MJ seems to be upset, so I'm trying not to make him feel worse.
>> Correct!

Last night, Dr MJ attended the meeting of aesthetic Academy and learned many items there.
>> Last night, Dr MJ attended the meeting of the Aesthetic Academy and learned many items there.

Of course, he shared those items with me this morning.
>> Correct!

He really wanted to apply new treatment of nail disorders until this month, and I have no reason to disagree with him
>> He really wanted to apply the new treatment for nail disorders until this month, and I have no reason to disagree with him.

Hence, we have no time to be hesitate.
>> Hence, we have no time to hesitate.

Next Monday is Labor Day, so after a long time, I can take a rest.
>> Correct!

I am going to spend time with my family, and It will be comforting to me.
>> Correct!
Or: it

Honesty is a child's character, I think.
>> Correct!

And, Dr. MJ is quite honesty for money, and That is his good weapon, I think.
>> And, Dr. MJ is quite honest for money, and that is his good weapon, I think.

He seems to be really happy, when he eat some delicious food.
>> He seems to be really happy, when he eats some delicious food.

At times, I forget to express my joyful emotion, though.
>> Correct!

Joy, gratitude, and happiness.
>> Correct!

We might feel these emotions easier, if we can keep our childlike mind.
>> Correct!

See you.
>> Correct!
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