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회원님의 영작문

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Today, I requested document named "diploma from my University" which is one of the document for getting a Mexico visa.
I can get it using the university's web site. I paid for three copies because I thought that I would need it for other visas in the future. But when I printed it, I found that my English name on it was written wrong which means that it's different from the English name on my passport. So, I called to the University and they just fixed it within a second without confirming my identity which made me a little bit embarrassed. ;;
Anyway, I could print it again. My name was written on it two times. But when I saw the paper, Just one was corrected and the other one remained uncorrected. So, I call to the university again. And I asked them to correct the other one also.
But they said that the other one is the name of president of the university. He has the same name as me!
I didn't know that!!!!!
Have a great day!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello KC!
This student shows incredible motivation and always tries to put their best effort into assignments. This is not only respectable but also inspirational to others. Their continued commitment to education leads me to believe that they're going to experience great academic success.
T. Jeny

1. some
>>Correct
2. some
>>Correct
3. any
>>Correct
4. some
>>Correct
5. some
>>Correct
Today, I requested document named "diploma from my University" which is one of the document for getting a Mexico visa.
>>Today, I requested a document named "diploma from my University," which is one of the documents for getting a Mexico visa.
I can get it using the university's web site.
>>I can get it using the University's website.
 I paid for three copies because I thought that I would need it for other visas in the future. 
>> I paid for three copies because I thought that I would need them for other visas in the future. 
But when I printed it, I found that my English name on it was written wrong, which means that it's different from the English name on my passport. 
>>Correct
So, I called to the University and they just fixed it within a second without confirming my identity which made me a little bit embarrassed. 
>>So, I called the university, and they just fixed it within a second without confirming my identity, which made me a little bit embarrassed. 
Anyway, I could print it again. My name was written on it two times. 
>>Correct
But when I saw the paper, Just one was corrected and the other one remained uncorrected. 
>>correct
So, I call to the university again. 
>>Correct
And I asked them to correct the other one also.
>>Correct
But they said that the other one is the name of president of the university. 
>>But they said that the other one is the name of the president of the university. 
He has the same name as me!
>>Correct
I didn't know that!!!!!
>>Correct
Have a great day!
>>Correct
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