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If I spend the night on the mountain, I prefer to set up a tent. I have spent the night in a cottage twice. But I couldn't sleep at all because some people snored in it. Of course there are now separated cottage or camping accommodations at the campsites, but on the summit of mountains there are only some cottages. So climbing up the mountains, we have only two options: to set up our own tent or to spend in a cottage.

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Good morning, Gi Yean!
Thank you for always completing your homework! 
See you tomorrow! :) Have a great day ahead! ^^
-T.Jhozel 
If I spend the night on the mountain, I prefer to set up a tent.
>> Correct!
OR: 
I prefer to spend the night on the mountain in a tent.
I have spent the night in a cottage twice.
>> Correct!
But I couldn't sleep at all because some people snored in it.
>> Correct!
Of course there are now separated cottage or camping accommodations at the campsites, but on the summit of mountains there are only some cottages.
>> Correct!
OR: 
Of course, separate cottage or camping accommodations are now available at campsites, but there are only a few cottages on mountain peaks.
So climbing up the mountains, we have only two options: to set up our own tent or to spend in a cottage.
>> Correct!
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