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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are some tropical fruits found and sold in your country?

Korea has four seasons, it has not able to grow tropical fruits.
However, recent develop in technology and global warming have led to warmer temperatures.
I saw the news that Korea also grow tropical fruits, among them mangoes and bananas.
But, most tropical fruits still imported.
Even in Korea, the price become more expensive due to various problems, taxes on imports,
labor costs, etc..
For example, now price of 2Kg of mangoes in Korea in 25,000(Korea)won .
If exchange it peso, it is 1045 pesos.
Any other fruits grown in Korea are also expensive, so I want to eat a lot of fruits with good prices.

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Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are some tropical fruits found and sold in your country?


Korea has four seasons, it has not able to grow tropical fruits.
>> Korea has four seasons, it is impossible to grow tropical fruits.
However, recent develop in technology and global warming have led to warmer temperatures.
>> However, recently developed technology and global warming have led to warmer temperatures.
I saw the news that Korea also grow tropical fruits, among them mangoes and bananas.
>> I saw the news that Korea also grow tropical fruits, among them are mangoes and bananas.
But, most tropical fruits still imported.
>> But, most tropical fruits are still imported.
Even in Korea, the price become more expensive due to various problems, taxes on imports, labor costs, etc.
>> CORRECT! 
For example, now price of 2Kg of mangoes in Korea in 25,000(Korea)won .
>> For example, the price of 2Kg of mangoes in Korea now is 25,000 Korean Won.
If exchange it peso, it is 1045 pesos.
>> If you will exchange it peso, it is 1045 pesos.
Any other fruits grown in Korea are also expensive, so I want to eat a lot of fruits with good prices.
>> CORRECT! 

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