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I need just one friend.

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I think we need just one friend because we don't need to have many friends, just if i'm happy, i meet one person who the laugh with me.
But the many friends are not bad things.
They share information and help each other.
Like many people, i think there are will be a lot of relationships in it.

So, i think i'm okay to have one friend, but other can be more.

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Hi Da Hye,

When you have fewer friends, you have more time for self-improvement, reflection, and growth, which can make your life more satisfying. When you have fewer people influencing your thoughts, perceptions, and actions, you become your own person. Because of this, you are more likely to make decisions on your own without worrying about what other people might think. See you tomorrow. ^^

~Teacher Cathy

 

I think we need just one friend because we don't need to have many friends, just if i'm happy, i meet one person who the laugh with me.

>>I think we don¡¯t need to have many friends; one is enough as long as I¡¯m happy to have someone to share laughter with me.

But the many friends are not bad things.

>>But having many friends is not a bad thing.

They share information and help each other.

>>CORRECT

OR>>They support each other and share information.

Like many people, i think there are will be a lot of relationships in it.

>>Like many people, I think there will be a lot of relationships in it.

So, i think i'm okay to have one friend, but other can be more.

>>So, I think I¡¯m okay to only have one friend, but others can have more.

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