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That's so hard points because many people have another idea.
But I think we don't need to help them.
Because they are choosing the best and good citizens do not help their choice.
Everything is their choice, if someone help them, they don't say "thank you" because they're already getting help.

So I think we don't help them and if we help them, they don't stand up.

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Hi Da Hye,

¡°If you give a man a fish, you feed him for a day. If you teach a man to fish, you feed him for a lifetime.¡± This term is often used in discussing ways to help others. The idea is that rather than just giving them help or a handout, it's better to train them and help them help themselves. Most of the time, the most capable people have the most success in life. That is because the more clever the individual is, the better their possibilities are to become flourishing throughout everyday life. You have to put in the time to become capable; there are no shortcuts in life. And please remember that boundaries are necessary, and if you fail to do this, you start living for others. This doesn¡¯t mean completely discarding other people¡¯s feelings, but rather, learning to find the right balance. Learn to say no, and let go of the fear that people would stop loving you because it is not true. See you later in class. ^^

~Teacher Cathy

 

That's so hard points because many people have another idea.

>> That is a hard point because a lot of people have different ideas.

But I think we don't need to help them.

>>CORRECT

OR>>But I don¡¯t think we need to help them.

Because they are choosing the best and good citizens do not help their choice.

>>Because they are choosing the best and good citizens does not help their choice.

Everything is their choice, if someone help them, they don't say "thank you" because they're already getting help.

>>Everything is their choice, if someone helps them, they don¡¯t say ¡°thank you¡± because they¡¯re already getting help.

So I think we don't help them and if we help them, they don't stand up.

>>CORRECT

OR>>So, I think there is no need help them because if we do, they won¡¯t stand up.

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