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What bad habits do you have, and how do they affect your life?

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You know, let's talk about something without smoking is that I have a habit of going out with people. If other people look at that, it can be seen as discriminating against people. To be honest, it's just that someone's close to the person who approached me first, and it's hard for me to approach people first. To put it simply, I'm a shy person.

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Fabulous Thursday, Elic! Success is the sum of small efforts, repeated day in and day out. Don't quit learning. Thank you for participating well today, you did great.

You know, let's talk about something without smoking is that I have a habit of going out with people.
>>> You know, let's talk about my other bad habit; except for smoking, I am not really good at approaching people.

If other people look at that, it can be seen as discriminating against people.
>>> If other people look at it, it can be a bit discriminating for other people.

To be honest, it's just that someone's close to the person who approached me first, and it's hard for me to approach people first.
>>> To be honest, it's really hard for me to approach people, especially strangers.

To put it simply, I'm a shy person.
>>> To make it simple, I'm a shy person.
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