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Why has the divorce rate increased in many countries in recent years?

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Well, I guess it's increasing because they think that they're different from what they've seen while growing up.
>>> CORRECT.

Previous generation used to be devoted to their family because of rough time.
>>> Previous generations used to be devoted to their families even on rough times.

But, current generation thinks that it affects the divorce rate because it values the individual.
>>> But the current generation thinks that it affects the divorce rate because it values the individual.

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